Feedback on 3rd cut

We showed our 3^rd cut of our production to our class in order to receive feedback from them and our teacher. Mrs. Allison gave us a feedback sheet which can be seen below, this was able to show us that our production falls mainly into the ‘proficient’ section but it does include some parts of basic and some of excellent level.

The main three sections are teacher believes we need to improve are;

1.       Mrs believes it is hard to tell that in this shot that Maya turns into Millie, we have reshot this several times but she still doesn’t believe it is working well enough. Although she doesn’t like it, she said she understand what we are trying to do and as a group we believe it is an extremely interesting shot so we are debating if we want to change it or not.

2.       At the end of our production we have accidently cut Paige off to soon so she doesn’t say the last word, therefore we just need to extend this and make it longer so she signs to the end of the line as at the minute it looks uncomfortable.

3.       In our 2^nd lot of masks we have used cross dissolve however we do not believe this looks the best and we have discovered that in our 1^st lot we used dip to black which we believe works better therefore we are going to change the 2^nd lot to dip to black as well.